Echo Verse Attempt 1: [Annoyed man throws a pebble by sipping a Coke] In the Last Straw Lake Ripples

Echo Verse Attempt 1: [Angry man throws a pebble] In the Last Straw Lake Ripples

When I plunge it into the flat Coke sheen?
Echo.                          Seen
Wrinkles-her-face by the last straw pebble,
Echo.                          Edible
Mud lake fizz, sinks rock through the gulping worm?
Echo.                         Squirm
Tunnels sucked at like Chaplin’s black Spaghetti,
Echo.                         Confetti
Circles flutter up from lips of entry.
Echo.                        City
Teeth pinched thin on the sweet liquid plum-meat,
Echo.                       Teat
Kissed stone drowns in the dark milk duck paddles?
Echo.                      Battles
Submersion on the bed scooped up to fall,
Echo.                     Float
Sipped seconds: edible squirm confetti.
Echo.                She
Whose surface swallows life’s flung skirmishes,
Echo.             Briefly ripples.

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